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INSINU - good band. they
make good noise - which is always the goal. their stage performance
is creative and fun. their songs rock. you can tell they
really like what they do.
Down 2 Earth - keyboard player is terrific and i also liked the bass
player and drummer. bass player is very engaging and really
compliments their act well. the band has great stage presence.
keyboard player is versatile, comfortable and a good singer.
The Poster Boys - these guys were thoroughly entertaining. their
music is very accessible. they are very tight and know who they are
and what they want to do on stage. drummer rocks. bass player
sings and performs really well. lead guitarist is very charming.
but i feel like the beauty of this band is how they work together and make
the whole greater than the sum of the parts. i'm a fan.
Yu-Ting Lin
Where's Gino? - Influenced by fairly
collegiate sounding acts. Creative rendition of R Kellys hit, very smart.
Good melodic ideas but the instrumental arrangements are less inspired.
Currently sense its more twang and alt rock especially with similar guitar
strumming patterns. As a result the arrangements restrict the melodic
movement in the song. Where a melody is creating tension or opening
a door for dynamics the arrangement doesn't follow. This is
especially the case on uptempo cuts. Bass needs to be the backbone
in the band and insync with kick, not following the strumming pattern of
guitars. Singer needs to move more freely in his verse melodies.
Rather repetitive and after a couple of songs feel as if it’s more
spoken word. Sometimes pitchy as well but I like his attitude and
confidence hence the rest of the band need to reflect this sentiment.
Continue writing and practice simplicity first as a band. Trying to
be individually flashy confuses the direction of both the repertoire and
band as a whole. And during this songwriting period, individually
practice their instruments. Listen to more music and mimic and from
here you’ll develop chops and begin to feel your identity.
Alf Landon - First track’s verse is in major key but vocals sounded like
she was singing in minor. Drummer is very metal leaning which is a
bit overkill for certain areas in the song. For example, use of the
double kick – though intriguing and different which I like but needs to
be done tastefully or it competes with the lead singer. The drummer
is never the showcase of the band, it’s the conductor, the tempo behind
the scenes keeping the band together. The lead guitar’s too far up
in the mix. Need more tones to work with parts of song. Not
everything is same distorted tone. You remove dynamics when you’re
simply pushing the envelope throughout the song. Collectively they
are very ambitious instrumentally speaking. But lead singer has to
step up and sing out. This is a full fledged rock band and can't be
dependent on music, general band to take lead. Singer is the lead.
And from here the band will know how to fit themselves and surround the
leader, not to poke out of the mix and want to be the shining star,
that’s the lead singer’s job. Repertoire is currently influenced
by what they’re listening to which is absolutely ok but as a result not
a distinct sound besides the fact the lead singer is a female.
Through time and more songs, writing will improve. Good job with
“There Goes My Hero”.
Down 2 Earth - Interesting song writing and liked the lead vocals
attitude plus courage to push the envelope with his vocals. Drummer
has the right idea but needs to practice simplicity. He has a solid
feel for the kit but needs to be precise, accurate and hold time.
The best drummers are those who can keep time, not how sophisticated your
fills are. Simplify the kit and learn how to play your drums as a
melodic instrument, not just a beat a rhythm. Because there's not
much high or mid instrumentation the bass tone, it needs to have less
bottom and tighter. That said drummer should also play picallo snare
to fill upper frequency if they choose to continue as three piece.
Kudos for lead singer replying “maybe next time” comment to crowd
yelling “freebird”. The delivery and response of that age old
heckling was witty and requires someone with center and frankly, star
appeal. Love the quirkiness and creative spirit in this project.
Love how they engaged the crowd. Because there's only 3 members its
critical they focus on arrangement and tones to not only fill space but to
also define their sound. With a keyboard, to metal guitar tones to
multi rhythmic drumming, can lose the focus of the song and sound. Believe
because they are so creative, with more time, practice and experimentation
they'll continue to develop. Currently within four songs I'm hearing
three different bands. But is a good project and lead singer is a
potential star. This could be a Sublime, could a Beck, just needs
direction and identity. Write more songs and don’t get carried
away with your individual instruments. Chops take years to build, be
patient and realize songs are what’s most important!
Cast No Shadow - Love the drummer, you are my hero. By far the
best drummer throughout the evening and a great deal of potential.
Your form is impeccable for your age and you clearly focus on the details,
the fundamentals, not trying to over-do yourself or set up an oversized
kit which is beyond your expertise. You had an average sized kit,
you kept near perfect time without a click track, and your playing is
tasteful – not clouded by the need to play super hard, super fast or do
fills that are fast but repetitive. You made the drums sound like a
melodic instrument while conducting the band, keeping time. This
sometimes we believe to be an innate skill, something that’s very hard
to teach at a young age. Please keep playing, please keep learning
the fundamentals. Those sophisticated drum solos, fills, poly-beats,
etc. will come to you in time as long as you keep working on fundamentals.
Don’t ever get intimidated, you could be the next great rock drummer!
I dig the raw power in this band, much of it stemming from a rock solid
drummer and aggressive guitar tone. Focus on songwriting and get
stronger melodies. Be careful of the guitar lead intros sounding too
similar. Need variety. Lead singer – I see where you’re
going with your movements and attitude but sing out and be yourself.
Your band is so heavy, need to push harder.
The Poster Boys - This project is the most together thus far. Has a
strong identity, sound, image and repertoire. You guys look great
and am impressed at how much you’ve thought about the importance of
visual creation. Bands sometimes have a very idealistic view of the
music speaks for itself but you have to realize, if you look completely
different from what your music sounds like, there’s no connection.
Imagine buying a book with a dark, mystery looking cover but the content,
plot is actually a love story. Same goes for a live show, if
you’re a heavy rock project and the lead singer is passive aggressive,
timid, it yields zero connection. As a result I love the attitude on
stage and only wish is lead singer get more into it. Candidly at
times feel the guitar player has more personality. Or you both can
switch roles, that could be interesting. Love the drummers
intensity, great presence. “It's All Good” is a VERY well
written song. Can hear it on a movie soundtrack. Last track
you played in set -- you can't start out tune with such a strong guitar
progression and build the anticipation but then start the first verse
light. Its a fun song and needs work on the arrangement to bring
more cohesiveness and life to the song. You have the whole package
thus far: great imaging, very very tight band, lots of face time
with one another practicing, you obviously practice in front of mirrors,
good songwriting, you listen to each other on stage and not stepping on
each other. I am extremely impressed and excited to see this
happening at the high school level. Continue writing and working on
your arrangements. I’m sure I’ll see your name in floating in
the industry soon.
Nestor - Piano arrangements and choice of chords are very ambitious.
Band overall needs better instrumental arrangement ideas. Currently
the bass is mostly following the rhythm guitar which flatlines the
dynamics and deflates an opportunity for the song to breath. Lead
singer has the right ideas but needs better vocal execution, rather pitchy
and needs to listen to tone, modulation, control of breath. Listen
to some of your favorite singers and focus on the detail. Singing
isn’t just about hitting the note, it’s about how you work with that
specific note or link of melodies to bring out the best of that melody.
There are plenty of people who can sing on key but it’s how they do it
that sets them apart. Also great solos tell a story and speed isn't
story. Guitarist has a nice Santana tone but needs to learn how to
be tasteful not careful on being too repetitive with solos. Though
they are in different key, notice your tendency to stick with one
pattern/lick. Tell a story with your solo. I sense more
practice time will help the project be more concise. A bit loose
around the edges.
Turbulent - The imaging doesn't quite flow and needs heavy thought.
Again, think about how your presentation matches your music. As your
songs state who your are and what you want to represent you need to make
sure the image reflects your repertoire. I would suggest the drummer
pair down his kit. The last time I saw a drum kit that complex was
in 1985 with hair metal bands. Bigger kit doesn’t mean better
especially if fills are fairly similar through the show. Slim it
down and learn how to fill space, make musical notes with your drums.
Bassist has a good feel but is overplaying and loves the spot light.
Listen to your band, be in sync with your drummer and the spot light is
the lead singer and your songs. Until you get HUGE and people start
to identify who you are, at that point in time then step outside the box
for example - FLEA. It would be far more interesting of a show if
you maintained the fun personality you have but behind the lead singer.
Guitarist has a very strong understanding of his instrument. I like
your tone but you need to find your own, I like your stage presence but
again develop your own. Slash is awesome, one of my favorites but
you’re also on your way to being awesome. But that will only be
road if you start developing your sense of self which I believe you
definitely have that ability. You have a wonderful ear for phrasing
and melody and that’s very hard to teach. You know you can shred
but you also know that that’s not what makes a great guitarist.
Keep listening to yourself and meanwhile start transcribing solos (if not
already) and transcribe ones that are tasteful. Learn foundation
first and from here shredding will come second nature. As for
vocals, need to have a better understanding of her tone and listen to
herself more. I enjoyed your enthusiasm, your presence on stage and
that drive to involve the crowd. But start honing in on your vocals,
it’s not only about singing the right note but how you approach the note
and end the note. There’s also a skill behind knowing the
microphone. The better you know your voice and your control,
you’ll then work with the microphone – should I come closer, stay far,
should I push more breath to give it more atmosphere, should I push my
throat harder to get more bite, etc. Also give you guys credit for
tightening up your show once you warmed up. First song was a little
hesitant but the show got better. Beyond all of those notes above, I
would suggest listening to each other on stage. Do not compete and
let the lead singer lead the band. As for songs, you’re all
talented players at your age. Learn how to write songs and from here
you’ll learn what your band is about and what you should sound
like.
INSINU - Lead singer has such a promising voice. Very good control
and amazing personality. Love the attitude but needs to spend more
time with mic and knowing how his voice pairs with an amplified sound.
Sometimes need not push the mic so hard. Overall a great rock voice.
The drummer needs to simplify and be more accurate plus adding finesse.
Listen to the songs and help the tunes, don't compete against it because
either you're trying to be flashy or play too loud. Guitar tone is
too metal and from the lead vocals tone would tweak the guitar tone.
Understand yourselves as a unit and know your place in each beat as the
song goes. Keep writing is the most important thing. You
need to find your sound, learn the art form of songwriting. From
here you'll know exactly what kind of band you'll lead, what band members
to hire and how to inspire and engage the audience. But this lead
singer is one of the most impressive i’ve seen to date. You could
be the next Kurt Cobain.
Party on the 3rd Floor - Singer has a pretty voice but not sure this is
the right band for her. She has a clean tone and is suited for a
more pop driven act, not so heavy. And when I say pop, it’s not
Britney Spears, I’d say a more pop leaning rock band. I would say
Avril meets Flyleaf meets Paramore. However given the project is
just a mere three months old, it’s going to take far more time to see
where the group leads. There’s solid musicianship in this and
three months simply isn’t enough time to gauge which direction they
could head. Best advice now is to practice and get a feel for one
another and how each member influences the band as a whole. Listen
to yourselves while you practice. Second is to write more songs,
share ideas, learn how to critique each other and not take it personally.
Have more band meetings and share your heroes, who you want to be and not
want to be. This is an opportunity to build something great from
scratch so keep the flow of communication open. Keep an open mind,
listen to each other’s music, even if it’s stuff you initially
disliked. The BEST musicians/bands are ones who don’t waste time
purposely criticizing other bands, saying they're better than other
musicians, etc. Instead these musicians support each other and put
their time, attention and focus on themselves, their instruments, their
own bands. Don’t waste time comparing yourself to other high
school bands or saying so and so sucks or who got better remarks from the
competition, just concentrate on what you’re doing and most of all HAVE
FUN!!
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